When I was a senior high school student, I felt that (I) was very trouble to go to school. Every time my father drives me to train station, we usually get( stuck in a )traffic jam. What’s even worse, it’s very common for train to arrive late. On the other hand, MRT is very different from it. It’s surprising that MRT is (automatic), there is no driver. MRT is not only convenient but also relatively safe while cars and motorcycles and buses are dangerous.( There are) big traffic jam and traffic accident on the road. How convenient MRT is! It makes our life more easily.
If you want to have(keep) a dog, which(what) kind(kinds) of dog(dogs) will you have(keep)? Some people would like to keep a Bull Terrier. Cause they(are) characterized by lively and restless movement. It is one of the boundless energy of dog. It may lie down on the ground, and suddenly jump up to run. So you probably have to be careful If you have little child or older people in the house.
Bull Terrier comes from England. There are many different breeds in its source of their ancestry. They are not much different in appearance, but previous in some of the acts and physical(bodies). The 19th century, the British considered it as a fighting dog because it’s a brave dog and good at fighting. Then over a period of time, pure white bull terrier were quite popular in England, known as the ”white knight ”.
In Taiwan, there are(X) many people like it, mostly because of its unique appearance. A cartoon from Japan also catches everybody’s attention to notice this quite lovely dog. Next time, if your friend ask you to suggest a dog to keep, you can tell them that Bull Terrier is a great choice.
Jack (cola) Speaking of the scariest bird, what come (comes) into your mind? It must be vultures because they will eat your body when you are dying. They live on dead or dying animals. Tibetans also come up with the sky-burial that they feed the vultures with human’s corpses.Vultures have a particular characteristic which is a bald head. They have little feathers on their neck so that they can keep it clean when they’re feeding. To avoid the disease from the dead body, they have a strong corrosive gastric acid that helps them stay away from sicknes. Since 1990, a great amount of vultures have died that causes (which caused)a big health problem to India.( Instead of vultures,rats)Rats and dogs replace the vultures to eat the dead body and also carry the infectious disease.We don’t have a lot of chances (,however,) to see the real vultures; however. (; however,去掉) they (They)are not as scary or harmful as the movie shows. They help the Indians to solve the health problem and clean the earth by eating (up) the useless bodies. If you do have an opportunity to see them, don’t be scared. ReplyDelete
(cola) Speaking of the scariest bird, what come (comes) into your mind? It must be vultures because they will eat your body when you are dying. They live on dead or dying animals. Tibetans also come up with the sky-burial that they feed the vultures with human’s corpses.Vultures have a particular characteristic which is a bald head. They have little feathers on their neck so that they can keep it clean when they’re feeding. To avoid the disease from the dead body, they have a strong corrosive gastric acid that helps them stay away from sicknes. Since 1990, a great amount of vultures have died that causes (which caused)a big health problem to India.( Instead of vultures,rats)Rats and dogs replace the vultures to eat the dead body and also carry the infectious disease.We don’t have a lot of chances (,however,) to see the real vultures; however. (; however,去掉) they (They)are not as scary or harmful as the movie shows. They help the Indians to solve the health problem and clean the earth by eating (up) the useless bodies. If you do have an opportunity to see them, don’t be scared. ReplyDelete
(vanessa) I'm really afraid of cockroaches. When I see them, what I do just yell and runaway(run away). I think they are disgusting and terrible, my mother always says:" That's so stupid! You are bigger than them!" I know that, but I still (don't) dare(not) to kill cockroach.
Cockroaches live in a wide range of environments around the world. You can see them anywhere. For example: (,)Your house, kitchen, restaurants, gutters and so on. They like warm and dirty place. They eat almost everything, (such as)milk, cheese, rice,(and) chocolate, they even gnaw your toe sometimes when you fall asleep. They have tentacles which lead them to find food and avoid natural enemies and their body is deep brown--maybe that’s why they look so disgusting.
Many people hope their house don’t have any cockroach each year. But this is very difficult. Trust me! I use so many ways to kill them, but they still appear in every summer. There has one thing everyone should know: If you see a cockroach and it can fly, please kill it immediately. It will born many cockroaches because it is “female”.
Escherichia coli: Common Bacteria (in) Our Life Escherichia coli, commonly abbreviated E. coli, which is usually found in our life. In fact, most of them are harmless, (even though) there are also some of them can cause us (to get) sick. The harmless one, some of them is benefit in producing vitamin K2, and can prevent (from) establishment of bad bacteria. Among ( ) them, what I want to introduce is the benefit of E. coli to our human beings. Most of us have a wrong idea that E. coli is bad for us. However, there is a common example of the good side of it. It is the application that E. coli is used to produce insulin of human beings. The reason why it is good is because there are many diabetes patients are lack of insulin. Since this way of producing insulin was (discovered) by researchers, those people who suffer from diabetes can have enough insulin. Next time when you hear the word “E. coli”, please do not always have negative concept (of) that it is always bad for us. It is also have its value for our human beings. Besides, what we need to do is to take (heed) of the food we eat and be sure that it is cooked. In doing so, we can avoid being invaded by E. coli ( ).
(Alva) Bananas Taiwan is a well-known kingdom of tropical fruits. There are many (kinds) of fruits produced in this small country. These fruits that we often eat are (bananas, watermelons, pineapples), and so on. The pulp of bananas (is) soft. Watermelons have rich water and pineapples are sweet and sour. There are a lot of different (flavors) of fruits in Taiwan. Our interest is with the banana. Most of our bananas export to Japan. There are a lot of reasons why they like to eat bananas (of Taiwan). Our weather is good for planting bananas. After improved for a long time, Taiwan bananas become very sweet . (It is convenient to eat bananas. Bananas help people to digest. Furthermore, they are very healthy for people.) Scientists also find that eating bananas can keep people away from getting cancer. In several years ago, we make a lot of money only from selling Taiwan bananas to other foreign countries. People in all over the world praise bananas of Taiwan. Because of this fruit, everyone (knows) the existence of Taiwan. Therefore, (bananas are) elected to be representative of the tropical fruits in Taiwan.
(Ellen) When you see a black bird on the way, you might think that(it) is a crow. However, that bird is also likely to be a myna. Mynas are black and feathered. Their voice is gruff and sonorous. You can find them easily whether you are in a city or not. They like to stand on wires or treetops. They eat insects and fruit(fruits).
Mynas are about 26 centimeters long. The bottom of their beaks is gamboge and the top side is ivory white. Their feet are mustard. The irises are scarlet. When they are flying, you can observe the white-dotted on the wings.
Mynas are popular because of their smart and bold character. They like to imitate voice and are good to(at) learn(learning) human language. When they are nine months old, they can start learning speaking. If you often talk to them, mynas(they) can speak well.
Mynas are wild and independent. Suggest keep them when they are still nestlings. They could be tamer(tamed). They have an exclusive cage. You have to clean it weekly and change the waste paper every day to preserve neat environment. Except forage, you can feed mynas some insects, such as mealworms, locusts to supply protein and(.) (You also can feed) some fruits like apples and bananas. Although mynas look black and dirty, they love taking a shower. You can place a birdbath in the cage, and put them in a position full of sunshine. They would feel happy and(and it can) decrease the rate of getting cold. There is one thing you need to keep in mind is(,) treating your pet well. Love your pet, even if that is a bird can be seen everywhere. Mynas can be your best friend as well.
Cellphone(Howard) With the technology growing, cellphone (cellphones)become the most important 3c products in the world. The most special feature is that we can surf the internet by it . It makes our life be convenient,and we can use it in many ways. For example, when we see the beautiful scenes, we can use our cellphone to catch that beautiful moment. What's more, we can also use it to (communicate) socialize with our friends (and wherever we are) , we can easily contact with our friends. Most important of all, we can play lots of fun games on it. When we are on our way to school, we can play it and we won't feel bored. Thanks to the advance technology, we can (own) have the convenient cellphone . Because of the cellphone , our life will(becomes) be colorful. We should cherish what we have now ,and how lucky we are.
With the technology growing, cellphone (cellphones)become the most important 3c products in the world. The most special feature is that we can surf the internet by it . It makes our life be convenient,and we can use it in many ways.
For example, when we see the beautiful scenes, we can use our cellphone to catch that beautiful moment. What's more, we can also use it to (communicate) socialize with our friends (and wherever we are) , we can easily contact with our friends. Most important of all, we can play lots of fun games on it. When we are on our way to school, we can play it and we won't feel bored.
Thanks to the advance technology, we can (own) have the convenient cellphone . Because of the cellphone , our life will(becomes) be colorful. We should cherish what we have now ,and how lucky we are.
Gina Nowadays, electronic products have improved rapidly. In(Of) all electronic products, which has been common(commonly) used is computer. Almost every household has one. Computer, which we called desktop computer usually, is heavy, and it works without a screen, a keyboard, and a mouse(its components include a screen, a keyboard and a mouse). It is not convenient for people(to) carry. So laptop has been come(came) into being. Laptop has many advantages. The most remarkable one is its weight. It weighs just(from) 1 or(to) 1.5 kilograms. Compared to desktop computer, it is really easy to carry.
The reasons why laptop so pouplar(popular) are not just because its weight. Also, laptop can storage electric. If we can just carry the laptop to a place, and( ) we (only)need to find a plug-in seat then we can use. How about(If) the place you go doesn’t have a plug-in seat? In average, the storage system can afford it working(to work) for 2 hours.
People’s handwriting are(is) becoming more and more ugly because of the laptop. They can type anywhere instead of write (writing)by themselves. What’s worse, some even don’t know the easiest words that elementary school students know. Face to those problems, we need to find a balance between technology and life. How to enrich our life and also enjoy the convenience that technology brings is what we need to learn now.
(Joy) Dolphin is an animal lives under the sea with a long nose and its body least 1.2 meters to 10 meters long. It weighs from 50 to 200 kilograms. (Each dolphin is) as smart as (a person when it is) three years old. (They have) a supersonic wave of its body on its head. They use their supersonic waves to (send messages) to other dolphins. They also have the great cerebral hemisphere can take (them) turns to rest. Because of the smart cerebral hemisphere, dolphins are always used to show special tricks to people or used in military.
It’s (was) about 20 years ago when Digital(d小寫) camera(加s) first appears(appeared) in America. While American proposed the Project Apollo, they created and installed it(them) on the artificial satellite in order to obtain the pictures on the Moon. There are three kinds of original digital cameras. The first type is the compact digital camera which is characterized by delicateness, convenience and simple manipulation. The second type is the single lens reflex camera. Due to the performance of several functions(This kind of camera has several functions), it is widely known and is developing continuously. The third type is the bridge camera which(Its) function is similar to the former. Contrary to the former, however, the lens is not changeable. The difference(s) between digital camera and traditional camera is(are) that photographic film is not indispensable to the former so that you can save a cost. You can watch the pictures you take and if you are not satisfied with the pictures, you can delete them immediately. The digital camera is so convenient that everyone can capture the very moment in our life at any moment(at any moment去掉). If you favor(prefer) real photos instead of(to) a file in your computer, you still can get your pictures developed to keep.(to keep去掉)
(Serena) The fruit stands for summer (The Fruit Stands for Summer)
Which(What) fruit can stand for summer? The answer is simple: watermelon. Because(X) watermelon which grow(grows) in summer time is sweeter than other season. There are many different kinds of it, for example: yellow watermelon and seedless watermelon. Both are sweet and juicy also can remove the heat of your body.
Watermelon has a green surface and red sarcocarp. It is uesd(used) to growing in tropical climate. Taiwan is the best place for watermelon, because Taiwan’s weather(the weather in Taiwan) is good for watermelon to grow up and it make(makes) watermelon sweeter. Moreover, there is a square watermelon in Taiwan , so don't think that every watermelon should be round.
Watermelon has many different ways to use. There is a medicine made of watermelon which can heal the wound in your mouth. The common way to use watermelon is to make a cup(glass) of watermelon juice. Anyway watermelon is a good fruit that has many different works. When summer is coming don’t forget to taste it, but remember don’t eat too much, or it would make you have a stomach-ache.
What is the most popular sport in the world? You (will) probably answer, ”Basketball or Football.” But to me, I will (say), “Soccer.” (Don't) forget the World Cup which (has) been held in South Africa in 2010. The great event (is) from beginning to end, people (stay) up late to watch the live broadcast. Also, there (are) also songs composed for the World Cup.
Soccer is a very dynamic sport, and it also requires teamwork to play it well. It first played in Britain in the middle 19th century, and each team must (has) 11 players. Therefore, soccer has a special situation that if players break rules, they are cautioned with a yellow card, and sent off with a red card.
However, soccer has many different rules, but I think that teamwork is the most significant role in this sport and the item needed in a soccer game (is) quite simple. Playing soccer will make people energetic and (enjoyful).
Spiders are air-breathing arthropods that have eight legs and chelicerae with fangs that inject venom. Spiders are found worldwide on every continent(,)except for Antarctica. Their guts are too narrow to take solids,(so) they (digest the food) by flooding it with (the)digestive system and grinding it with the bases of their palps,as they don't have true jaws. Spiders' main food is meat,and many kinds of spiders larvae to feed on nectar. Spiders (is) a common symbol in art and mythology,representing the carious combination of patience,cruelty and creativity,because of their diverse behavior. (Actully),most spiders are harmless to human,so we don't need to worry about it.
Why do ancient people keep cats to chase rats away? The reason is simple: the cats are tender animals but a born hunter. They have keen senses in order to capture preys. It is easy for them to see at night. On the other hand, cats also hear and smell excellently. They move and response quickly. No other domestic pet can compare with them. In ancient times the cats feed on rats. However, they catch cockroaches agilely in the modern world. As a nature of hunting, cats kill cockroaches instead of eating them. In my cat’s case, she bites off their heads and flattens them into death. Being an intruder, a cockroach will be hunt and die under Pudding’s craws. So it is an efficient way to prevent from those pests. Cats are best hunters at night in （host’s） house. When you get up in the morning, don't be shocked when they bring trophies in front of you!
The Silica Memory Foam Gel Pillow Silica memory foam gel pillows are a kind of pillow which can mold (make) the shape of anything pressing against it(pressing it). If you put your head on it, you will feel your head is sinking into the pillow( the pillow is very soft. However, when you don’t use the pillow, the pillow’s shape remains unchanged.). When you remove your head from it, you can find that the pillow remains your head shape for a while. It is the reason that people like to use this magic pillow. However, there is something bad of this type of pillow. That is, a new silica memory foam gel pillow may release a plastic odor. This bad smell could make you lie awake (uncomfortable) all night. What’s more, rolling over may be a problem for side sleepers who use this kind of pillow. The worst is that people will feel stiff and tired all day after getting a bad night’s sleep. Silica memory foam gel pillows are not always a good choice for each person. So it is important to pick a comfortable pillow which helps you sleep well.
Chocolate is one of the most popular desserts around the world. Most people like it very much. However, chocolate has different qualities. One of the most famous chocolates is Godiva. It has many different shapes, such as round, square, bar…etc. And it also has many kinds of flavors. In addition to common flavors, there even have wine flavors. Godiva refers to as LV of chocolates.
Godiva’s chocolate was found by Joseph Draps in 1926. “Godiva” was named from(after) Ms. Godiva. Most of its chocolates are made in Belgium. There are three points why it was so famous. First, they choose the best materials and made without man-made spice. This is why it tastes so delicious and good. Second, they use modern tools and advanced production(productive) skills. And the two points are why their chocolates has(have) many beautiful and cute shapes. Finally, they are positively to find special and elegant packaging(package) in order to match every festivals(festival).
I like their(Godiva) chocolate, though it is little expensive. When I first ate the chocolate, I realized that it proves its quality and brand. The multiple shapes and flavors provided many choices to customers. We can choose what we want and enjoy it.
What is the healthiest drink (that anyone of us can think of) ? Most of us (would) say "green tea." We are right. (From looking at the level of) fermentation, there are three kinds of tea(:) green tea, oolong tea, and black tea. (Fermented for Black tea; half-fermented for Oolong tea, and unfermented for Green tea.) In the ancient time, Green tea is regarded as a kind of medicine. It has tea polyphenols in which benefits our body.
(Due to the factor that green tea) is (unfermented), (it can restore tea polyphenols). Tea polyphenols can not only be used for treatment and prevention for cancer but also reduce the risk of heart disease. There are also (other benefits in drinking green tea and the best one may be - help us lose weight!)
Green tea is good (for our health). We should drink it every day. Especially in winter, we can drink it with hot water (and keep ourselves warm and healthy at the same time.)
You must be familiar with the world-known APPLE logo. Now it's everywhere to be seen that the "bitten" apple by Apple Inc. (The “bitten” apple by Apple Inc. can be seen everywhere. )
Here, however, is not focusing on that legendary company, but something else about the icon "apple." (However, I am not focusing on the legendary company but on the icon “apple.” )
As a symbol apples appear frequently in variable literature works and myths. (Apples serve as meaningful symbols in various literary works and myths. )
First (,) we all know the forbidden fruit in the Book of Genesis is commonly considered to be apples. Eve and Adam ate the apple then knew the knowledge. (Adam and Eve eat the apples and then acquire knowledge. )
Second in Greek mythology, the goddess of Discord, Eris, tossed a golden apple to the party and hence triggered the Trojan war. (Second (,) in Greek mythology, the Goddess of discord, Eris, tosses a golden apple to a party. Hence, she triggers the Trojan War.)
In the famous fairy tale Snow White, a poisonous apple is used to lay Snow White in dreams. (In the famous fairy tale Snow White, a poisonous apple lays Snow White asleep.)
The image of apples is sweet and tempting. And the taste is just the same - crispy and with light aroma. (Apples are crispy and with light aromas. The images of apples are sweetness and temptation.)
Maybe that's why the apples are so popular around the world. -----------------以上為原文，以下為更改並重組後------------
Apples serve as meaningful symbols in various literary works and myths.First, we all know the forbidden fruit in the Book of Genesis is commonly considered to be apples. Adam and Eve eat the apples and then acquire knowledge. Second, in Greek mythology, the Goddess of discord, Eris, tosses a golden apple to a party. Hence, she triggers the Trojan War. Third, in the famous fairy tale Snow White, a poisonous apple lays Snow White asleep. The images of apples are sweetness and temptation. Nowadays, the most famous apple is Apple Inc.’s logo, a bitten apple. The logo can be seen everywhere, such as Mac, iPods, iPads, and the hottest iPhones. Apple Inc. is considered the most important high-tech barometer. In conclusion, the images of apples are not only temptation but also technology.
Everyone used to have a dream when they were little(.) (These) may be the most wonderful dreams of all your life but will they be picked up after you (experience) life with the knowing of the bitterness of living? I think I do. Animals have always been the love of my life. Before I (grew) up, I tried every small contact (x) with those lovely creatures (by either) watching the TV program or feeding the stray from the streets, or saving earthworms from getting crushed on a raining day. But now as a big girl, I am able to keep animals of my own and have more contact with intimacy.
(x)Born the rat girl, I personally love rats of any kinds. I started having (a) cute little pet mice from the pet store at the few first years of college. Those are the ones that (have) round bodied and with (a) short tails. They are no bigger than the size of half of your cell phones and they do not make immense sounds while in captivity. They are fairly tamed creatures and will only most likely to (x)bite on you (if) they get scared or (if) you accidentally hurt them. The very special feature of these particular mice is that they contain two small bags each at the sides of their cheek so they can store food in them. It is such a funny sight to see them having a full mouth of food in their special “store room” and they look as (being put) on an unhappy face. Although cute and tame, those are quite short-living creatures who only have a life span of average two years.
There are also some other spices of mice (x) which people do not (need to take care of), that is – the laboratory rats. These are the ones which do not meet the eyes of the ordinary due to their pointy nose and long bare tails. These are generally called “the big white” and “the small white”. This particular rats has the look just like the street rats you would see out on the street, only have they not being black. They big white normally are snow white or having black head and patches of black looking like as if they are wearing a black jacket. The small white on the other hand varies in quite some colors from pure black to snow white, street brown, golden yellow, wheat color, to even the pattern of pet rabbits. You may think that they are not the real pet mice anyone (has) in mind, yet they, apart from their pointy nose and hideous long tails are just as lovely and attached to their masters if you treat them with love through everyday life.
Many years has gone by as to allow me in the sharing of the experiences to this article due to quite amount of the keeping of these short-living pet mice and rats. Although the two kinds are seemingly so huge in differences, they had been so dearly to me in many same ways. I name them the same(,) hold them (,)and talk to them the same. They all responded well and loved me back. My favorite one called “Chloe” used to climbed on my hand whenever I (laid) my hand in front of her and she would cringed on my palm and sleep! Isn’t that intimacy something to remember?
(Amy) Movies I like to see movies. There are many kinds of movies for us to choose from, such as science-fiction, comedies and animated films. Action movies can easily be found at a local theater. Among all types of movies, I like action movies best. Action movies are thrilling. The plot is often related to some secret events or crime, and the leading role may be involved in it. He or she has to go on an adventure to solve the problem. It really makes me feel nervous during the movies. I always keep thinking about the exciting plots of action movies after watching them and this thought makes me want to watch them again. I do not see movies often. watching action movies makes me feel relaxed. I will enjoy it as I can.
(People’s clothes 英一甲 A100320021 周德雯) What is (one of necessities) in our life? I think (that someone may) have the answer (which) is clothes. (Wearing clothes is necessary for) our life. (We) can protect our body no matter what the weather is hot or cold (by wearing clothes). (There are) many styles (on clothes). Basically, (there are) short sleeves, long sleeves and sleeveless garments.
In summer, everyone have to wear short sleeves because the weather is very hot. Once we wear it, we can feel good. (The lengths of sleeves sometime exceed) our elbow. On the other hand, if the weather is too hot, we need (other) clothes (that are) sleeveless garments. We need (them) very much. When we wear (them), we will feel nice.
In winter, everyone have to wear long sleeves because the weather is so cold. (Long) sleeves can make our body warm and comfortable. The sleeves wrap whole hand. It is very important for everybody in winter.
Clothes (are necessary) for people. It (also makes people look pretty) and use it to dress up. (These are reasons why women) love to buy many clothes!
Have you ever seen the (movie)“Finding Nema”? If you have, you must be familiar with the clownfish. The body of the clownfish is orange alternating with white. In the ocean, its special appearance impresses everyone. (The) clownfish is also called anemonefish, for they live (among) sea anemones. (The) clownfish and sea anemones have a close relationship, called mutualism. They provide(d) some benefits to each other. For example, the sea anemone protects the clownfish from predators by its poisonous tentacles. The clownfish keeps parasites (away) from the sea anemone, in return. To sum up, if you still don’t know the clownfish, you have two methods. One, (watch) the classic animation “Finding Nemo”. Second, plan a trip to the aquarium near your home, and take a good look at what in the sea anemones!
If you have watched the movie "Jaws", you will be amazed at the fantastic description of (shark) by Steven Allan Spielberg, and you will also be frightened by the terrible attack of (shark). Having those scary teeth, (shark) (is) regarded as the (fiercest) and (most) dangerous animals in the ocean.
(Size of Sharks are) from (only去掉) 6 inches to 18 inches. (Shark doesn't) have (air bladder) like the others, (so most of them) cannot stop swimming. If they stop, they will submerge and be suffocated. (Not to mention去掉) (Shark has) strong (and去掉) fearful teeth (and) (they have去掉) incredible sense organs. (Moreover,)They have excellent nose and ears. They can smell (the去掉) blood far from 400 meters, and hear (the去掉) animal's activities far from 1000 meters. Besides these advantages, (they have去掉) (shark has) a particular one - They have electrical (sensitivity) and can easily find any animal hidden in the sand.
Although (they are去掉) (shark is) horrible and the natural predators, we can't live without them. We need them to balance the (marine) environment. However, the truth is that only a few sharks are dangerous to (human).
What is the most delicious dessert? If you ask me this question, my answer will be (the cakes). (Cakes are) a bread-like food, but (they taste softer) than bread. (They are) the best dessert for afternoon tea.
(Cakes are a kind of baked desserts). (They are made from a mixture) of flour, sugar, eggs, and butter. (There are a lot of flavors of) cakes. If you want to eat very sweet (one), you can choose (a) chocolate cake. If (you) think (the) chocolate (cake) (is) too sweet to eat, you can choose (a) cheese cake.
No matter what kinds of (cakes are much attracted to you, they are not only) the best dessert for afternoon tea (but) also the (best) meal for (celebrating) (a) special day.
(Anonymous) I'm really afraid of cockroaches. When I see them, what I do just yell and (run away). I think they are disgusting and terrible(.) My mother always says(,)"That's so stupid! You are bigger than them!" I know that, but I still don't dare to kill (cockroaches).
Cockroaches live in a wide range of environments around the world. You can see them anywhere. They like warm and dirty place, for example(,) your house, kitchen, restaurants, gutters and so on. They eat almost everything (like) milk, cheese, rice, chocolate(;moreover,)they even gnaw your toe()when you fall asleep. (Besides,) they have tentacles which lead them to find food and avoid natural enemies. Their body is deep brown--maybe that’s why they look so disgusting.
Many people hope (that they won't see any cockroach in their house, which is) very difficult. () I (try) so many ways to kill them, but they still appear in every summer. There (is) one thing everyone should know, If you see a cockroach (that) can fly, please kill it immediately. Because it is “female", it will (bear) many baby cockroaches.
(Dina) IPhone 4s is the last product that Steve Jobs, the Apple founder and former CEO, invented. Compare to (Compared with) the former iPhone, it has many new functions. The specialist capability is the voice recognizing (recognition) and talking assistant, Siri. Siri is an intelligent personal assistant. It can answer the user’s questions, make recommendations and remind the user what he or she should do. Also, it has some improvement on the camera. The camera on (the) iPhone 4s has 8 megapixels. It makes photo images more clearly (clear) and closer to the reality. Moreover, pictures. (The) IPhone 4s has many useful functions that other smartphones do not have. It leads a role ( It is the most top product) in smartphones. It is a wonderful invention that enriches and improves all of(xxxxx) our lives.
When it comes to a plant with dangerous looks,( perhaps we may think of the cacti initially.) The vegetation with bulk of thrusts has always given human beings a strange and unsafe feeling; however, they shield the cacti from freezing cold and flaming temperature.
(The thrusts play a big role in any aspect and protect the lives of the cactus, although they look like nothing important but odd. Their thrusts had been foliage at the very beginning, but have changed into small, thin and sharp shapes later in order to protect themselves from any possible dangers like losing their water content from flesh.)The other feature of the cactus is they need little water every week because these kinds of plants originated from desert areas where the weather fluctuates very fierce and often, the cactus are accustomed to the bad conditions of the environment.
(Despite the fact that the cactus need little water and have a strong vitality, you have to make all of efforts to look after them). Growing a plant is like rearing a pet. Above all, (you have to treat them well) and do not regard them as rubbish.
Matcha is considered the(the most) valuable tea in Japan. Recently, there are more and more desserts with matcha flavor.(more desserts made of Matcha.)
Drinking Matcha can decrease blood sugar and hypertension and avoid obese,provide against cancer.(It also can avoid obese and against the cancer.) Therefore it can be found in numerous healthy food products.(many healthy food) Because it has lots of advantage,it becomes Japanese favorite tea.(Matcha has many advantage of health and it is Japanese favorite tea.)
Besides Japanese,now Taiwanese also like to drink Matcha.(many Taiwanese also like to drink Matcha now.) For our health, we can drink matcha regarly (regularly).
(Dexter) Tiger Tiger can be fallen into the category of cat - like that of cat or leopard. It looks very beautiful. This animals also belongs to one of the carnivores marked by its great demand for meat each day. In zoos, tigers have lived for 20 to 26 years, which also seems to be their longevity in the wild. Tiger's hair is very colorful and special with a pattern of dark vertical stripes on reddish - orange fur. The others they have a total body length of up to 3.3 meters and weighting up to 306 kg and have exceptionally stout teeth, moreover canines are the longest among livings felids with a crown height of as much as 74.5 mm or even 90 mm. However, these precious animals facing the crisis of extinction with hunter's greed of selling its skin impelled by some rich people's inclination to keep the tiger's skin. If not take any further action to protect tigers from being extinct, our future generations might not witness tigers's beauty.
I believe(去掉) Pocket Monsters is a childhood accompanied cartoon that keep in our memories all the time(, one of the classical cartoons in our childhood, is always on our mind). And(去掉) without a doubt(,) the representative character is Pikachu(.) which has(Pikachu is a pocket monster with) yellow skin, brown stripes back, the tip of the ears black(加上and the red cheek). (It's) Cheek with seemingly red spots known as the "Electrical bag"(is not only for its cuteness also a "Electrical bag", the place store the electricity) .And it happen to be my favorite cartoon characters.(移到最後一段) Actually, Pikachu Is a kind of mouse, not just a name. Standard height 0.4meters, weight 6 kilograms(It is 0.4 meters height and 6 kilograms weight).It’s main(去掉) skill(skills) is(are) to(去掉) (the)electric shock, (the)100,000 volts, a flash of lightning, (the) thunder, (and a)Volts attack. Pikachu is(去掉) not only appear(appears) in the cartoon also includes(shows up in) the ever(every) popular game(games). (It happen(happens) to be my favorite cartoon characters(character).) I hope that Pikachu can a(still) company(accompany) us after many(a few) years later(去掉) ,(and) let these deeply memories that we have to share with the children of future generation.(we can share all of these deeply memories to our offspring)
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Pocket Monster, one of the classical cartoons in our childhood, is always on our mind. Without a doubt, the representative character is Pikachu. Pikachu is a pocket monster with yellow skin, brown stripes back, the tip of the ears black and the red cheek. It's cheek is not only for its cuteness also a "Electrical bag", the place store the electricity. It is 0.4 meters height and 6 kilograms weight. It's skills are the electric shock, the 100,000 volts, a flash of lightning, the thunder and a Volts attack. Pikachu not only appears in the cartoon also shows up in every popular games. It happens to be my favorite cartoon character. I hope that Pikachu can still accompany us after a few years and we can share all of these deeply memories to our offspring.
(Phoebe) The pickled vegetable ramen, one kind of the Asian food.(no the) It taste sour and pungent.(It taste"s"...) After eating it, I can feel very full. I think that it is a symbol of Asian food. If you want to try it, you can go to the supermarket or the restaurant.(If...you can get it from ...) Whether it is the instant noodles or the freshly brewed noodles, (It doesn't matter that you eat instant noodles or ...)both of them are delicious. Besides test tasty, (tasting)it is also beneficial for our body. So, how can you miss such a perfect food? Just wash away and search for it!(?) Go!
(Andy) When I was a child, my parents often took with me to see the(去掉) fire bugs(firebugs) in the night on the Yang-Min mountain. Fire bugs(firebugs) was beautiful and mysterious little(去掉) insect. Its whole(去掉) life have to go through four steps: egg, larva, pupa, imago. Its growth is long, lasting 10 months during the larva, but its imago was transcend life, about 20 days.
Fire bug(firebug), named firefly and lightening bug. It was(needs) inhale the dew and nectar to keep its life. The most important feature of belly gives out light. Their(The) different its(去掉) places: The female worm gives out one light, the male worm gives out two lights, even no lights. Not every fire bug(firebug) can radiate. The color of the glow emitted from the fire bug(firebug) is very beautiful.
After the mating, they can find the place where is gloomy and humid. They put the egg(s) in the moss or soil. Egg is a round ball type and oval. It's very small, only about 0.2 to 2.5 millimeter. When you touch the egg, feeling soft like a pudding. Gradually, the egg was darker, even emitted the dim light during the last stage of embryo. This moment, a little life was being born.
There is a proverb (saying) that “The eyes are the windows of one’s soul.” When people have conversation with others, the eyes are the first thing that people contact with. Depending on how much pigment you have, the (pupils) of the eyes may have hundreds of (variations) between each person. For instance, most of the oriental people have brown eyes. However, some of them may have (pairs of darker) eyes than other.
Moreover, people can distinguish some special (emotions) or thoughts through the eye contact. If people want to know someone is lying or not, we can recognize from his or her eyes. It not only appears in () speculative novels or TV dramas but is the crucial point (of) solving (cases). Besides, the eye contact is () the important tool for any of (actors).
Next time when you meet your friend, (try) to look () into their eyes. Perhaps you can find (some differences) from yours, or even realize their (inner personality) (much deeper)!
A way that works on a person is not necessarily effective on another. The same truth can also be applied to the way a teacher teaches his or her students. Some teachers might be trapped in a dilemma [where] (when or that?) their (way of) teaching [principles] are sometimes ineffective but sometimes work like a charm. The core of the problem is that [students are not entirely the same.](every student is different.) Therefore, it is impossible to [view them as a whole.] (teach them in the same way.) Generally, students can be categorized into four types. The first type is the student who has talents in learning and is also dedicated to learning. The second type is the student who does not have [the] talents but studies diligently. The third type is the student who has [the] talents but never tries to use them. The fourth type is the student who has no talents and never studies.
If teachers want to direct their students toward the right path, they must realize the characteristics and differences among these four types of students. Students of the first type always stand out among other students and might incur envy and enmity. Therefore, during the course of their studying careers, teachers should keep enlivening their passion for learning but should not pamper them lest other students should feel belittled. Students of the second type often receive praise and admiration from teachers and peers. If they fail, very few people will blame them because they have spent much time and effort. Therefore, teachers should encourage them and assist them in finding the reason(s) of their failure. Students of the third type tend to be irresponsible or self-righteous(?) because of their talents, so teachers [should](could) admonish them with the fable of The Tortoise and the Hare where slow and steady wins the race, and persuade them into studying(working) hard. Students of the fourth type worry teachers the most because they have not figure(d) out what they are good at. Therefore, teachers have to arouse their motives for learning or anything [in which] they are interested (in).
Nurture is more important than nature. Teachers should educate their students according to their aptitude, instead of imposing the same (way of) teaching [principles] upon every student. By helping them explore and develop their interests, students are able to reach their full potential in [the domains of] their specialties. [In conclusion, success is one percent talent and ninety-nine percent perspiration.]
Katherine I believe Pocket Monsters （are）childhood accompanied cartoon that keep in our memories all the time. And without a doubt （this） representative character is Pikachu. （It）has yellow skin, brown stripes back ,（and）the tip of the ears （is） black. Cheek with （去掉seemingly）red spots （which was）known as the "Electrical bag" .（Therefore, Pikachu is ）my favorite cartoon character. Actually, Pikachu （is） a kind of mouse, not just a name.（His） standard height 0.4meters, weight 6 kilograms .（His） main skill is to（force） electric shock, 100,000 volts, a flash of lightning（and）thunder, Volts attack. Pikachu （去掉is） not only （appears） in the cartoon （but）plays an important role in many games, （so）I hope that Pikachu can accompany us（even if） many years later. （Hoping）these （unforgettable）memories that we （could）share with the children of future generation.
(Valencia)
ReplyDeleteWhen I was a senior high school student, I felt that (I) was very trouble to go to school. Every time my father drives me to train station, we usually get( stuck in a )traffic jam. What’s even worse, it’s very common for train to arrive late. On the other hand, MRT is very different from it. It’s surprising that MRT is (automatic), there is no driver.
MRT is not only convenient but also relatively safe while cars and motorcycles and buses are dangerous.( There are) big traffic jam and traffic accident on the road.
How convenient MRT is! It makes our life more easily.
(Cindy)
ReplyDeleteIf you want to have(keep) a dog, which(what) kind(kinds) of dog(dogs) will you have(keep)? Some people would like to keep a Bull Terrier. Cause they(are) characterized by lively and restless movement. It is one of the boundless energy of dog. It may lie down on the ground, and suddenly jump up to run. So you probably have to be careful If you have little child or older people in the house.
Bull Terrier comes from England. There are many different breeds in its source of their ancestry. They are not much different in appearance, but previous in some of the acts and physical(bodies). The 19th century, the British considered it as a fighting dog because it’s a brave dog and good at fighting. Then over a period of time, pure white bull terrier were quite popular in England, known as the ”white knight ”.
In Taiwan, there are(X) many people like it, mostly because of its unique appearance. A cartoon from Japan also catches everybody’s attention to notice this quite lovely dog. Next time, if your friend ask you to suggest a dog to keep, you can tell them that Bull Terrier is a great choice.
Jack
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Speaking of the scariest bird, what come (comes) into your mind? It must be vultures because they will eat your body when you are dying. They live on dead or dying animals. Tibetans also come up with the sky-burial that they feed the vultures with human’s corpses.Vultures have a particular characteristic which is a bald head. They have little feathers on their neck so that they can keep it clean when they’re feeding. To avoid the disease from the dead body, they have a strong corrosive gastric acid that helps them stay away from sicknes. Since 1990, a great amount of vultures have died that causes (which caused)a big health problem to India.( Instead of vultures,rats)Rats and dogs replace the vultures to eat the dead body and also carry the infectious disease.We don’t have a lot of chances (,however,) to see the real vultures; however. (; however,去掉) they (They)are not as scary or harmful as the movie shows. They help the Indians to solve the health problem and clean the earth by eating (up) the useless bodies. If you do have an opportunity to see them, don’t be scared.
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(cola)
ReplyDeleteSpeaking of the scariest bird, what come (comes) into your mind? It must be vultures because they will eat your body when you are dying. They live on dead or dying animals. Tibetans also come up with the sky-burial that they feed the vultures with human’s corpses.Vultures have a particular characteristic which is a bald head. They have little feathers on their neck so that they can keep it clean when they’re feeding. To avoid the disease from the dead body, they have a strong corrosive gastric acid that helps them stay away from sicknes. Since 1990, a great amount of vultures have died that causes (which caused)a big health problem to India.( Instead of vultures,rats)Rats and dogs replace the vultures to eat the dead body and also carry the infectious disease.We don’t have a lot of chances (,however,) to see the real vultures; however. (; however,去掉) they (They)are not as scary or harmful as the movie shows. They help the Indians to solve the health problem and clean the earth by eating (up) the useless bodies. If you do have an opportunity to see them, don’t be scared.
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(vanessa)
ReplyDeleteI'm really afraid of cockroaches. When I see them, what I do just yell and runaway(run away). I think they are disgusting and terrible, my mother always says:" That's so stupid! You are bigger than them!" I know that, but I still (don't) dare(not) to kill cockroach.
Cockroaches live in a wide range of environments around the world. You can see them anywhere. For example: (,)Your house, kitchen, restaurants, gutters and so on. They like warm and dirty place. They eat almost everything, (such as)milk, cheese, rice,(and) chocolate, they even gnaw your toe sometimes when you fall asleep.
They have tentacles which lead them to find food and avoid natural enemies and their body is deep brown--maybe that’s why they look so disgusting.
Many people hope their house don’t have any cockroach each year. But this is very difficult. Trust me! I use so many ways to kill them, but they still appear in every summer. There has one thing everyone should know: If you see a cockroach and it can fly, please kill it immediately. It will born many cockroaches because it is “female”.
Escherichia coli: Common Bacteria (in) Our Life
ReplyDeleteEscherichia coli, commonly abbreviated E. coli, which is usually found in our life. In fact, most of them are harmless, (even though) there are also some of them can cause us (to get) sick. The harmless one, some of them is benefit in producing vitamin K2, and can prevent (from) establishment of bad bacteria. Among ( ) them, what I want to introduce is the benefit of E. coli to our human beings.
Most of us have a wrong idea that E. coli is bad for us. However, there is a common example of the good side of it. It is the application that E. coli is used to produce insulin of human beings. The reason why it is good is because there are many diabetes patients are lack of insulin. Since this way of producing insulin was (discovered) by researchers, those people who suffer from diabetes can have enough insulin.
Next time when you hear the word “E. coli”, please do not always have negative concept (of) that it is always bad for us. It is also have its value for our human beings. Besides, what we need to do is to take (heed) of the food we eat and be sure that it is cooked. In doing so, we can avoid being invaded by E. coli ( ).
(Alva)
ReplyDeleteBananas
Taiwan is a well-known kingdom of tropical fruits. There are many (kinds) of fruits produced in this small country. These fruits that we often eat are (bananas, watermelons, pineapples), and so on. The pulp of bananas (is) soft. Watermelons have rich water and pineapples are sweet and sour. There are a lot of different (flavors) of fruits in Taiwan. Our interest is with the banana.
Most of our bananas export to Japan. There are a lot of reasons why they like to eat bananas (of Taiwan). Our weather is good for planting bananas. After improved for a long time, Taiwan bananas become very sweet . (It is convenient to eat bananas. Bananas help people to digest. Furthermore, they are very healthy for people.) Scientists also find that eating bananas can keep people away from getting cancer.
In several years ago, we make a lot of money only from selling Taiwan bananas to other foreign countries. People in all over the world praise bananas of Taiwan. Because of this fruit, everyone (knows) the existence of Taiwan. Therefore, (bananas are) elected to be representative of the tropical fruits in Taiwan.
(Ellen)
ReplyDeleteWhen you see a black bird on the way, you might think that(it) is a crow. However, that bird is also likely to be a myna. Mynas are black and feathered. Their voice is gruff and sonorous. You can find them easily whether you are in a city or not. They like to stand on wires or treetops. They eat insects and fruit(fruits).
Mynas are about 26 centimeters long. The bottom of their beaks is gamboge and the top side is ivory white. Their feet are mustard. The irises are scarlet. When they are flying, you can observe the white-dotted on the wings.
Mynas are popular because of their smart and bold character. They like to imitate voice and are good to(at) learn(learning) human language. When they are nine months old, they can start learning speaking. If you often talk to them, mynas(they) can speak well.
Mynas are wild and independent. Suggest keep them when they are still nestlings. They could be tamer(tamed). They have an exclusive cage. You have to clean it weekly and change the waste paper every day to preserve neat environment. Except forage, you can feed mynas some insects, such as mealworms, locusts to supply protein and(.) (You also can feed) some fruits like apples and bananas.
Although mynas look black and dirty, they love taking a shower. You can place a birdbath in the cage, and put them in a position full of sunshine. They would feel happy and(and it can) decrease the rate of getting cold.
There is one thing you need to keep in mind is(,) treating your pet well. Love your pet, even if that is a bird can be seen everywhere. Mynas can be your best friend as well.
Cellphone(Howard)
ReplyDeleteWith the technology growing, cellphone (cellphones)become the most important 3c products in the world. The most special feature is that we can surf the internet by it . It makes our life be convenient,and we can use it in many ways.
For example, when we see the beautiful scenes, we can use our cellphone to catch that beautiful moment. What's more, we can also use it to (communicate) socialize with our friends (and wherever we are) , we can easily contact with our friends. Most important of all, we can play lots of fun games on it. When we are on our way to school, we can play it and we won't feel bored.
Thanks to the advance technology, we can (own) have the convenient cellphone . Because of the cellphone , our life will(becomes) be colorful. We should cherish what we have now ,and how lucky we are.
Cellphone(Howard)
DeleteWith the technology growing, cellphone (cellphones)become the most important 3c products in the world. The most special feature is that we can surf the internet by it . It makes our life be convenient,and we can use it in many ways.
For example, when we see the beautiful scenes, we can use our cellphone to catch that beautiful moment. What's more, we can also use it to (communicate) socialize with our friends (and wherever we are) , we can easily contact with our friends. Most important of all, we can play lots of fun games on it. When we are on our way to school, we can play it and we won't feel bored.
Thanks to the advance technology, we can (own) have the convenient cellphone . Because of the cellphone , our life will(becomes) be colorful. We should cherish what we have now ,and how lucky we are.
Gina
ReplyDeleteNowadays, electronic products have improved rapidly. In(Of) all electronic products, which has been common(commonly) used is computer. Almost every household has one. Computer, which we called desktop computer usually, is heavy, and it works without a screen, a keyboard, and a mouse(its components include a screen, a keyboard and a mouse). It is not convenient for people(to) carry. So laptop has been come(came) into being. Laptop has many advantages. The most remarkable one is its weight. It weighs just(from) 1 or(to) 1.5 kilograms. Compared to desktop computer, it is really easy to carry.
The reasons why laptop so pouplar(popular) are not just because its weight. Also, laptop can storage electric. If we can just carry the laptop to a place, and( ) we (only)need to find a plug-in seat then we can use. How about(If) the place you go doesn’t have a plug-in seat? In average, the storage system can afford it working(to work) for 2 hours.
People’s handwriting are(is) becoming more and more ugly because of the laptop. They can type anywhere instead of write (writing)by themselves. What’s worse, some even don’t know the easiest words that elementary school students know. Face to those problems, we need to find a balance between technology and life. How to enrich our life and also enjoy the convenience that technology brings is what we need to learn now.
(Joy)
ReplyDeleteDolphin is an animal lives under the sea with a long nose and its body least 1.2 meters to 10 meters long. It weighs from 50 to 200 kilograms.
(Each dolphin is) as smart as (a person when it is) three years old. (They have) a supersonic wave of its body on its head. They use their supersonic waves to (send messages) to other dolphins. They also have the great cerebral hemisphere can take (them) turns to rest.
Because of the smart cerebral hemisphere, dolphins are always used to show special tricks to people or used in military.
(Stephanie)
ReplyDeleteIt’s (was) about 20 years ago when Digital(d小寫) camera(加s) first appears(appeared) in America. While American proposed the Project Apollo, they created and installed it(them) on the artificial satellite in order to obtain the pictures on the Moon.
There are three kinds of original digital cameras. The first type is the compact digital camera which is characterized by delicateness, convenience and simple manipulation. The second type is the single lens reflex camera. Due to the performance of several functions(This kind of camera has several functions), it is widely known and is developing continuously. The third type is the bridge camera which(Its) function is similar to the former. Contrary to the former, however, the lens is not changeable.
The difference(s) between digital camera and traditional camera is(are) that photographic film is not indispensable to the former so that you can save a cost. You can watch the pictures you take and if you are not satisfied with the pictures, you can delete them immediately. The digital camera is so convenient that everyone can capture the very moment in our life at any moment(at any moment去掉). If you favor(prefer) real photos instead of(to) a file in your computer, you still can get your pictures developed to keep.(to keep去掉)
(Serena)
ReplyDeleteThe fruit stands for summer (The Fruit Stands for Summer)
Which(What) fruit can stand for summer? The answer is simple: watermelon. Because(X) watermelon which grow(grows) in summer time is sweeter than other season. There are many different kinds of it, for example: yellow watermelon and seedless watermelon. Both are sweet and juicy also can remove the heat of your body.
Watermelon has a green surface and red sarcocarp. It is uesd(used) to growing in tropical climate. Taiwan is the best place for watermelon, because Taiwan’s weather(the weather in Taiwan) is good for watermelon to grow up and it make(makes) watermelon sweeter. Moreover, there is a square watermelon in Taiwan , so don't think that every watermelon should be round.
Watermelon has many different ways to use. There is a medicine made of watermelon which can heal the wound in your mouth. The common way to use watermelon is to make a cup(glass) of watermelon juice. Anyway watermelon is a good fruit that has many different works. When summer is coming don’t forget to taste it, but remember don’t eat too much, or it would make you have a stomach-ache.
Vera
ReplyDeleteWhat is the most popular sport in the world? You (will) probably answer, ”Basketball or Football.” But to me, I will (say), “Soccer.” (Don't) forget the World Cup which (has) been held in South Africa in 2010. The great event (is) from beginning to end, people (stay) up late to watch the live broadcast. Also, there (are) also songs composed for the World Cup.
Soccer is a very dynamic sport, and it also requires teamwork to play it well. It first played in Britain in the middle 19th century, and each team must (has) 11 players. Therefore, soccer has a special situation that if players break rules, they are cautioned with a yellow card, and sent off with a red card.
However, soccer has many different rules, but I think that teamwork is the most significant role in this sport and the item needed in a soccer game (is) quite simple. Playing soccer will make people energetic and (enjoyful).
Spiders (Joanna)
ReplyDeleteSpiders are air-breathing arthropods that have eight legs and chelicerae with fangs that inject venom.
Spiders are found worldwide on every continent(,)except for Antarctica. Their guts are too narrow to take solids,(so) they (digest the food) by flooding it with (the)digestive system and grinding it with the bases of their palps,as they don't have true jaws. Spiders' main food is meat,and many kinds of spiders larvae to feed on nectar.
Spiders (is) a common symbol in art and mythology,representing the carious combination of patience,cruelty and creativity,because of their diverse behavior.
(Actully),most spiders are harmless to human,so we don't need to worry about it.
Evelyn
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Why do ancient people keep cats to chase rats away? The reason is simple: the cats are tender animals but a born hunter. They have keen senses in order to capture preys. It is easy for them to see at night. On the other hand, cats also hear and smell excellently. They move and response quickly. No other domestic pet can compare with them.
In ancient times the cats feed on rats. However, they catch cockroaches agilely in the modern world. As a nature of hunting, cats kill cockroaches instead of eating them. In my cat’s case, she bites off their heads and flattens them into death. Being an intruder, a cockroach will be hunt and die under Pudding’s craws. So it is an efficient way to prevent from those pests.
Cats are best hunters at night in （host’s） house. When you get up in the morning, don't be shocked when they bring trophies in front of you!
The Silica Memory Foam Gel Pillow
ReplyDeleteSilica memory foam gel pillows are a kind of pillow which can mold (make) the shape of anything pressing against it(pressing it). If you put your head on it, you will feel your head is sinking into the pillow( the pillow is very soft. However, when you don’t use the pillow, the pillow’s shape remains unchanged.). When you remove your head from it, you can find that the pillow remains your head shape for a while. It is the reason that people like to use this magic pillow.
However, there is something bad of this type of pillow. That is, a new silica memory foam gel pillow may release a plastic odor. This bad smell could make you lie awake (uncomfortable) all night. What’s more, rolling over may be a problem for side sleepers who use this kind of pillow. The worst is that people will feel stiff and tired all day after getting a bad night’s sleep.
Silica memory foam gel pillows are not always a good choice for each person. So it is important to pick a comfortable pillow which helps you sleep well.
Chocolate(Julie)
ReplyDeleteChocolate is one of the most popular desserts around the world. Most people like it very much. However, chocolate has different qualities. One of the most famous chocolates is Godiva. It has many different shapes, such as round, square, bar…etc. And it also has many kinds of flavors. In addition to common flavors, there even have wine flavors. Godiva refers to as LV of chocolates.
Godiva’s chocolate was found by Joseph Draps in 1926. “Godiva” was named from(after) Ms. Godiva. Most of its chocolates are made in Belgium. There are three points why it was so famous. First, they choose the best materials and made without man-made spice. This is why it tastes so delicious and good. Second, they use modern tools and advanced production(productive) skills. And the two points are why their chocolates has(have) many beautiful and cute shapes. Finally, they are positively to find special and elegant packaging(package) in order to match every festivals(festival).
I like their(Godiva) chocolate, though it is little expensive. When I first ate the chocolate, I realized that it proves its quality and brand. The multiple shapes and flavors provided many choices to customers. We can choose what we want and enjoy it.
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ReplyDeleteWhat is the healthiest drink (that anyone of us can think of) ? Most of us (would) say "green tea." We are right. (From looking at the level of) fermentation, there are three kinds of tea(:) green tea, oolong tea, and black tea. (Fermented for Black tea; half-fermented for Oolong tea, and unfermented for Green tea.) In the ancient time, Green tea is regarded as a kind of medicine. It has tea polyphenols in which benefits our body.
(Due to the factor that green tea) is (unfermented), (it can restore tea polyphenols). Tea polyphenols can not only be used for treatment and prevention for cancer but also reduce the risk of heart disease. There are also (other benefits in drinking green tea and the best one may be - help us lose weight!)
Green tea is good (for our health). We should drink it every day. Especially in winter, we can drink it with hot water (and keep ourselves warm and healthy at the same time.)
Heather
ReplyDeleteYou must be familiar with the world-known APPLE logo.
Now it's everywhere to be seen that the "bitten" apple by Apple Inc. (The “bitten” apple by Apple Inc. can be seen everywhere. )
Here, however, is not focusing on that legendary company, but something else about the icon "apple."
(However, I am not focusing on the legendary company but on the icon “apple.” )
As a symbol apples appear frequently in variable literature works and myths.
(Apples serve as meaningful symbols in various literary works and myths. )
First (,) we all know the forbidden fruit in the Book of Genesis is commonly considered to be apples.
Eve and Adam ate the apple then knew the knowledge.
(Adam and Eve eat the apples and then acquire knowledge. )
Second in Greek mythology, the goddess of Discord, Eris, tossed a golden apple to the party and hence triggered the Trojan war.
(Second (,) in Greek mythology, the Goddess of discord, Eris, tosses a golden apple to a party. Hence, she triggers the Trojan War.)
In the famous fairy tale Snow White, a poisonous apple is used to lay Snow White in dreams.
(In the famous fairy tale Snow White, a poisonous apple lays Snow White asleep.)
The image of apples is sweet and tempting. And the taste is just the same - crispy and with light aroma.
(Apples are crispy and with light aromas. The images of apples are sweetness and temptation.)
Maybe that's why the apples are so popular around the world.
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Apples serve as meaningful symbols in various literary works and myths.First, we all know the forbidden fruit in the Book of Genesis is commonly considered to be apples. Adam and Eve eat the apples and then acquire knowledge. Second, in Greek mythology, the Goddess of discord, Eris, tosses a golden apple to a party. Hence, she triggers the Trojan War. Third, in the famous fairy tale Snow White, a poisonous apple lays Snow White asleep. The images of apples are sweetness and temptation.
Nowadays, the most famous apple is Apple Inc.’s logo, a bitten apple. The logo can be seen everywhere, such as Mac, iPods, iPads, and the hottest iPhones. Apple Inc. is considered the most important high-tech barometer.
In conclusion, the images of apples are not only temptation but also technology.
Zara --> Kellysa
ReplyDeleteEveryone used to have a dream when they were little(.) (These) may be the most wonderful dreams of all your life but will they be picked up after you (experience) life with the knowing of the bitterness of living? I think I do. Animals have always been the love of my life. Before I (grew) up, I tried every small contact (x) with those lovely creatures (by either) watching the TV program or feeding the stray from the streets, or saving earthworms from getting crushed on a raining day. But now as a big girl, I am able to keep animals of my own and have more contact with intimacy.
(x)Born the rat girl, I personally love rats of any kinds. I started having (a) cute little pet mice from the pet store at the few first years of college. Those are the ones that (have) round bodied and with (a) short tails. They are no bigger than the size of half of your cell phones and they do not make immense sounds while in captivity. They are fairly tamed creatures and will only most likely to (x)bite on you (if) they get scared or (if) you accidentally hurt them. The very special feature of these particular mice is that they contain two small bags each at the sides of their cheek so they can store food in them. It is such a funny sight to see them having a full mouth of food in their special “store room” and they look as (being put) on an unhappy face. Although cute and tame, those are quite short-living creatures who only have a life span of average two years.
There are also some other spices of mice (x) which people do not (need to take care of), that is – the laboratory rats. These are the ones which do not meet the eyes of the ordinary due to their pointy nose and long bare tails. These are generally called “the big white” and “the small white”. This particular rats has the look just like the street rats you would see out on the street, only have they not being black. They big white normally are snow white or having black head and patches of black looking like as if they are wearing a black jacket. The small white on the other hand varies in quite some colors from pure black to snow white, street brown, golden yellow, wheat color, to even the pattern of pet rabbits. You may think that they are not the real pet mice anyone (has) in mind, yet they, apart from their pointy nose and hideous long tails are just as lovely and attached to their masters if you treat them with love through everyday life.
Many years has gone by as to allow me in the sharing of the experiences to this article due to quite amount of the keeping of these short-living pet mice and rats. Although the two kinds are seemingly so huge in differences, they had been so dearly to me in many same ways. I name them the same(,) hold them (,)and talk to them the same. They all responded well and loved me back. My favorite one called “Chloe” used to climbed on my hand whenever I (laid) my hand in front of her and she would cringed on my palm and sleep! Isn’t that intimacy something to remember?
(Amy)
ReplyDeleteMovies
I like to see movies. There are many kinds of movies for us to choose from, such as science-fiction, comedies and animated films. Action movies can easily be found at a local theater. Among all types of movies, I like action movies best.
Action movies are thrilling. The plot is often related to some secret events or crime, and the leading role may be involved in it. He or she has to go on an adventure to solve the problem. It really makes me feel nervous during the movies. I always keep thinking about the exciting plots of action movies after watching them and this thought makes me want to watch them again.
I do not see movies often. watching action movies makes me feel relaxed. I will enjoy it as I can.
(People’s clothes 英一甲 A100320021 周德雯)
ReplyDeleteWhat is (one of necessities) in our life? I think (that someone may) have the answer (which) is clothes. (Wearing clothes is necessary for) our life. (We) can protect our body no matter what the weather is hot or cold (by wearing clothes). (There are) many styles (on clothes). Basically, (there are) short sleeves, long sleeves and sleeveless garments.
In summer, everyone have to wear short sleeves because the weather is very hot. Once we wear it, we can feel good. (The lengths of sleeves sometime exceed) our elbow. On the other hand, if the weather is too hot, we need (other) clothes (that are) sleeveless garments. We need (them) very much. When we wear (them), we will feel nice.
In winter, everyone have to wear long sleeves because the weather is so cold. (Long) sleeves can make our body warm and comfortable. The sleeves wrap whole hand. It is very important for everybody in winter.
Clothes (are necessary) for people. It (also makes people look pretty) and use it to dress up. (These are reasons why women) love to buy many clothes!
Ann
ReplyDeleteClownfish
Have you ever seen the (movie)“Finding Nema”? If you have, you must be familiar with the clownfish. The body of the clownfish is orange alternating with white. In the ocean, its special appearance impresses everyone.
(The) clownfish is also called anemonefish, for they live (among) sea anemones. (The) clownfish and sea anemones have a close relationship, called mutualism. They provide(d) some benefits to each other. For example, the sea anemone protects the clownfish from predators by its poisonous tentacles. The clownfish keeps parasites (away) from the sea anemone, in return.
To sum up, if you still don’t know the clownfish, you have two methods. One, (watch) the classic animation “Finding Nemo”. Second, plan a trip to the aquarium near your home, and take a good look at what in the sea anemones!
Chiao
ReplyDeleteIf you have watched the movie "Jaws", you will be amazed at the fantastic description of (shark) by Steven Allan Spielberg, and you will also be frightened by the terrible attack of (shark). Having those scary teeth, (shark) (is) regarded as the (fiercest) and (most) dangerous animals in the ocean.
(Size of Sharks are) from (only去掉) 6 inches to 18 inches. (Shark doesn't) have (air bladder) like the others, (so most of them) cannot stop swimming. If they stop, they will submerge and be suffocated. (Not to mention去掉) (Shark has) strong (and去掉) fearful teeth (and) (they have去掉) incredible sense organs. (Moreover,)They have excellent nose and ears. They can smell (the去掉) blood far from 400 meters, and hear (the去掉) animal's activities far from 1000 meters. Besides these advantages, (they have去掉) (shark has) a particular one - They have electrical (sensitivity) and can easily find any animal hidden in the sand.
Although (they are去掉) (shark is) horrible and the natural predators, we can't live without them. We need them to balance the (marine) environment. However, the truth is that only a few sharks are dangerous to (human).
The Cake
ReplyDeleteby Jodie
What is the most delicious dessert? If you ask me this question, my answer will be (the cakes). (Cakes are) a bread-like food, but (they taste softer) than bread. (They are) the best dessert for afternoon tea.
(Cakes are a kind of baked desserts). (They are made from a mixture) of flour, sugar, eggs, and butter. (There are a lot of flavors of) cakes. If you want to eat very sweet (one), you can choose (a) chocolate cake. If (you) think (the) chocolate (cake) (is) too sweet to eat, you can choose (a) cheese cake.
No matter what kinds of (cakes are much attracted to you, they are not only) the best dessert for afternoon tea (but) also the (best) meal for (celebrating) (a) special day.
(Anonymous)
ReplyDeleteI'm really afraid of cockroaches. When I see them, what I do just yell and (run away). I think they are disgusting and terrible(.) My mother always says(,)"That's so stupid! You are bigger than them!" I know that, but I still don't dare to kill (cockroaches).
Cockroaches live in a wide range of environments around the world. You can see them anywhere. They like warm and dirty place, for example(,) your house, kitchen, restaurants, gutters and so on. They eat almost everything (like) milk, cheese, rice, chocolate(;moreover,)they even gnaw your toe()when you fall asleep. (Besides,) they have tentacles which lead them to find food and avoid natural enemies. Their body is deep brown--maybe that’s why they look so disgusting.
Many people hope (that they won't see any cockroach in their house, which is) very difficult. () I (try) so many ways to kill them, but they still appear in every summer. There (is) one thing everyone should know, If you see a cockroach (that) can fly, please kill it immediately. Because it is “female", it will (bear) many baby cockroaches.
(Dina)
ReplyDeleteIPhone 4s is the last product that Steve Jobs, the Apple founder and former CEO, invented. Compare to (Compared with) the former iPhone, it has many new functions. The specialist capability is the voice recognizing (recognition) and talking assistant, Siri. Siri is an intelligent personal assistant. It can answer the user’s questions, make recommendations and remind the user what he or she should do.
Also, it has some improvement on the camera. The camera on (the) iPhone 4s has 8 megapixels. It makes photo images more clearly (clear) and closer to the reality. Moreover, pictures.
(The) IPhone 4s has many useful functions that other smartphones do not have. It leads a role ( It is the most top product) in smartphones. It is a wonderful invention that enriches and improves all of(xxxxx) our lives.
Winnie
ReplyDeleteThe cactus
When it comes to a plant with dangerous looks,( perhaps we may think of the cacti initially.) The vegetation with bulk of thrusts has always given human beings a strange and unsafe feeling; however, they shield the cacti from freezing cold and flaming temperature.
(The thrusts play a big role in any aspect and protect the lives of the cactus, although they look like nothing important but odd. Their thrusts had been foliage at the very beginning, but have changed into small, thin and sharp shapes later in order to protect themselves from any possible dangers like losing their water content from flesh.)The other feature of the cactus is they need little water every week because these kinds of plants originated from desert areas where the weather fluctuates very fierce and often, the cactus are accustomed to the bad conditions of the environment.
(Despite the fact that the cactus need little water and have a strong vitality, you have to make all of efforts to look after them). Growing a plant is like rearing a pet. Above all, (you have to treat them well) and do not regard them as rubbish.
Joanne
ReplyDeleteMatcha is considered the(the most) valuable tea in Japan. Recently, there are more and more desserts with matcha flavor.(more desserts made of Matcha.)
Drinking Matcha can decrease blood sugar and hypertension and avoid obese,provide against cancer.(It also can avoid obese and against the cancer.) Therefore it can be found in numerous healthy food products.(many healthy food) Because it has lots of advantage,it becomes Japanese favorite tea.(Matcha has many advantage of health and it is Japanese favorite tea.)
Besides Japanese,now Taiwanese also like to drink Matcha.(many Taiwanese also like to drink Matcha now.) For our health, we can drink matcha regarly (regularly).
(Dexter)
ReplyDeleteTiger
Tiger can be fallen into the category of cat - like that of cat or leopard. It looks very beautiful. This animals also belongs to one of the carnivores marked by its great demand for meat each day. In zoos, tigers have lived for 20 to 26 years, which also seems to be their longevity in the wild.
Tiger's hair is very colorful and special with a pattern of dark vertical stripes on reddish - orange fur. The others they have a total body length of up to 3.3 meters and weighting up to 306 kg and have exceptionally stout teeth, moreover canines are the longest among livings felids with a crown height of as much as 74.5 mm or even 90 mm.
However, these precious animals facing the crisis of extinction with hunter's greed of selling its skin impelled by some rich people's inclination to keep the tiger's skin. If not take any further action to protect tigers from being extinct, our future generations might not witness tigers's beauty.
(Katherine)
ReplyDeleteI believe(去掉) Pocket Monsters is a childhood accompanied cartoon that keep in our memories all the time(, one of the classical cartoons in our childhood, is always on our mind). And(去掉) without a doubt(,) the representative character is Pikachu(.) which has(Pikachu is a pocket monster with) yellow skin, brown stripes back, the tip of the ears black(加上and the red cheek). (It's) Cheek with seemingly red spots known as the "Electrical bag"(is not only for its cuteness also a "Electrical bag", the place store the electricity) .And it happen to be my favorite cartoon characters.(移到最後一段)
Actually, Pikachu Is a kind of mouse, not just a name. Standard height 0.4meters, weight 6 kilograms(It is 0.4 meters height and 6 kilograms weight).It’s main(去掉) skill(skills) is(are) to(去掉) (the)electric shock, (the)100,000 volts, a flash of lightning, (the) thunder, (and a)Volts attack.
Pikachu is(去掉) not only appear(appears) in the cartoon also includes(shows up in) the ever(every) popular game(games). (It happen(happens) to be my favorite cartoon characters(character).) I hope that Pikachu can a(still) company(accompany) us after many(a few) years later(去掉) ,(and) let these deeply memories that we have to share with the children of future generation.(we can share all of these deeply memories to our offspring)
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Pocket Monster, one of the classical cartoons in our childhood, is always on our mind. Without a doubt, the representative character is Pikachu. Pikachu is a pocket monster with yellow skin, brown stripes back, the tip of the ears black and the red cheek. It's cheek is not only for its cuteness also a "Electrical bag", the place store the electricity.
It is 0.4 meters height and 6 kilograms weight. It's skills are the electric shock, the 100,000 volts, a flash of lightning, the thunder and a Volts attack.
Pikachu not only appears in the cartoon also shows up in every popular games. It happens to be my favorite cartoon character. I hope that Pikachu can still accompany us after a few years and we can share all of these deeply memories to our offspring.
(Phoebe)
ReplyDeleteThe pickled vegetable ramen, one kind of the Asian food.(no the) It taste sour and pungent.(It taste"s"...) After eating it, I can feel very full. I think that it is a symbol of Asian food.
If you want to try it, you can go to the supermarket or the restaurant.(If...you can get it from ...) Whether it is the instant noodles or the freshly brewed noodles, (It doesn't matter that you eat instant noodles or ...)both of them are delicious.
Besides test tasty, (tasting)it is also beneficial for our body. So, how can you miss such a perfect food? Just wash away and search for it!(?) Go!
(Andy)
ReplyDeleteWhen I was a child, my parents often took with me to see the(去掉) fire bugs(firebugs) in the night on the Yang-Min mountain. Fire bugs(firebugs) was beautiful and mysterious little(去掉) insect. Its whole(去掉) life have to go through four steps: egg, larva, pupa, imago. Its growth is long, lasting 10 months during the larva, but its imago was transcend life, about 20 days.
Fire bug(firebug), named firefly and lightening bug. It was(needs) inhale the dew and nectar to keep its life. The most important feature of belly gives out light. Their(The) different its(去掉) places: The female worm gives out one light, the male worm gives out two lights, even no lights. Not every fire bug(firebug) can radiate. The color of the glow emitted from the fire bug(firebug) is very beautiful.
After the mating, they can find the place where is gloomy and humid. They put the egg(s) in the moss or soil. Egg is a round ball type and oval. It's very small, only about 0.2 to 2.5 millimeter. When you touch the egg, feeling soft like a pudding. Gradually, the egg was darker, even emitted the dim light during the last stage of embryo. This moment, a little life was being born.
(Eureka)
ReplyDeleteThe eyes
There is a proverb (saying) that “The eyes are the windows of one’s soul.” When people have conversation with others, the eyes are the first thing that people contact with. Depending on how much pigment you have, the (pupils) of the eyes may have hundreds of (variations) between each person. For instance, most of the oriental people have brown eyes. However, some of them may have (pairs of darker) eyes than other.
Moreover, people can distinguish some special (emotions) or thoughts through the eye contact. If people want to know someone is lying or not, we can recognize from his or her eyes. It not only appears in () speculative novels or TV dramas but is the crucial point (of) solving (cases). Besides, the eye contact is () the important tool for any of (actors).
Next time when you meet your friend, (try) to look () into their eyes. Perhaps you can find (some differences) from yours, or even realize their (inner personality) (much deeper)!
Pinky
ReplyDeleteA way that works on a person is not necessarily effective on another. The same truth can also be applied to the way a teacher teaches his or her students. Some teachers might be trapped in a dilemma [where] (when or that?) their (way of) teaching [principles] are sometimes ineffective but sometimes work like a charm. The core of the problem is that [students are not entirely the same.](every student is different.) Therefore, it is impossible to [view them as a whole.] (teach them in the same way.) Generally, students can be categorized into four types. The first type is the student who has talents in learning and is also dedicated to learning. The second type is the student who does not have [the] talents but studies diligently. The third type is the student who has [the] talents but never tries to use them. The fourth type is the student who has no talents and never studies.
If teachers want to direct their students toward the right path, they must realize the characteristics and differences among these four types of students. Students of the first type always stand out among other students and might incur envy and enmity. Therefore, during the course of their studying careers, teachers should keep enlivening their passion for learning but should not pamper them lest other students should feel belittled. Students of the second type often receive praise and admiration from teachers and peers. If they fail, very few people will blame them because they have spent much time and effort. Therefore, teachers should encourage them and assist them in finding the reason(s) of their failure. Students of the third type tend to be irresponsible or self-righteous(?) because of their talents, so teachers [should](could) admonish them with the fable of The Tortoise and the Hare where slow and steady wins the race, and persuade them into studying(working) hard. Students of the fourth type worry teachers the most because they have not figure(d) out what they are good at. Therefore, teachers have to arouse their motives for learning or anything [in which] they are interested (in).
Nurture is more important than nature. Teachers should educate their students according to their aptitude, instead of imposing the same (way of) teaching [principles] upon every student. By helping them explore and develop their interests, students are able to reach their full potential in [the domains of] their specialties. [In conclusion, success is one percent talent and ninety-nine percent perspiration.]
Katherine
ReplyDeleteI believe Pocket Monsters （are）childhood accompanied cartoon that keep in our memories all the time. And without a doubt （this） representative character is Pikachu. （It）has yellow skin, brown stripes back ,（and）the tip of the ears （is） black. Cheek with （去掉seemingly）red spots （which was）known as the "Electrical bag" .（Therefore, Pikachu is ）my favorite cartoon character.
Actually, Pikachu （is） a kind of mouse, not just a name.（His） standard height 0.4meters, weight 6 kilograms .（His） main skill is to（force） electric shock, 100,000 volts, a flash of lightning（and）thunder, Volts attack.
Pikachu （去掉is） not only （appears） in the cartoon （but）plays an important role in many games, （so）I hope that Pikachu can accompany us（even if） many years later. （Hoping）these （unforgettable）memories that we （could）share with the children of future generation.